A thing that remains after
something
is finished or ended.
What is
left
over
from rape?
I was six,
at first.
He was
30-something?
In a child’s eyes
all men are
ancient.
The making of this dish
was heat
in slow coils of electric
dark-haired arms
small limbs
like bird bones and a
fluttering heart.
Since,
my history grows like neon
mold, rainbows of color
sick twisting of life
on leftovers.
I am tired of taking
apart words to
find their meanings.
Left.
Over.
Written in response to The Daily Post writing challenge for this week,here. Poem by Annie Jadin, speakingvoiceless.wordpress.com.
Poignant and powerful.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you.
LikeLike
Thank you!
LikeLike
Great title. Thank you for sharing.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for reading. π
LikeLike
This is very powerful and sadly beautiful.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks.
LikeLike
well many say poetry is for the young and old. of course your not young. nice piece
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yep, poetry is for everyone. π Thanks for reading.
LikeLike
Reblogged this on SAVE OUR PLANET and commented:
takingalook
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for stopping by!
LikeLike
Reblogged this on The Blog OF Magical Thinking.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aww, thanks for the reblog.
LikeLike
Welcome π
LikeLike
Wow. Thanks for sharing this rugged beauty.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for reading it. π
LikeLike
Stunning. You approach this subject matter with defiance and courage. Really well written.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Meg!
LikeLike
Congratulations on being Freshly Pressed.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks. π
LikeLike
This is really extraordinary work. Thank you for sharing it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m glad you enjoyed it.
LikeLike
I have shivers. Nicely done.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ah, I think that’s the best response a poem can receive. π Thank you.
LikeLike
I have read it a twice over now and the words, their hidden secrets carry so much weight. Light and dark, innocence and power. Did you write it in one sitting, I feel two moods?
LikeLiked by 2 people
This was a one-sitting poem. I’m not surprised that two moods come across. I think it is impossible for me to think about this subject matter and have just one mood or emotion in my head. Thank you for reading. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
A beautiful and gut-wrenching response to leftovers, something to stay with me long after I’ve left the page.
(Congratulations on being Freshly Pressed.)
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you! I’m glad it touched you.
LikeLike
yeah right ! π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for your comment. π
LikeLike
Reblogged this on chrisgirlfriend and commented:
I really like that
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for the reblog. I’m glad you like my poem!
LikeLike
thank you
LikeLike
Reblogged this on Imax World Of Max's Blog.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for the reblog! And thanks for reading. π
LikeLike
Amazing and thought provoking!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you, amanda!
LikeLike
Awsome
LikeLike
Thanks!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wellcome !!
LikeLike
Reblogged this on soundofthepen and commented:
Nice
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks. π
LikeLike
Very powerful words, extremely moving. I’m impressed by the poetic skills you have! Don’t stop writing poems!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! I’m not planning to stop. π Although sometimes my job/life slow me down for awhile, haha.
LikeLike
I am at a loss for words….devastating yet beautiful…this poem stayed with me long after reading it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you. I’m glad it had an impact.
LikeLike
Nice poem
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLike
This is beautifully sad… A powerful response.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Lala! π
LikeLike
Love it
http://www.fashionforlunch.net
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLike
Very powerful and very beautiful. Thank you for sharing
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for reading. π I’m glad you enjoyed it.
LikeLike
Your word break open my core, the very heart of the matter.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for reading. π
LikeLike
Powerful!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Touching post. Congratulations being Freshly Pressed π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks. π
LikeLike
So heart warming and expressive…..powerful words…Annie I write poems too….would love it if you visit my blog….want to stay in touch….
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for your comment. I’ll check out your blog now. π
LikeLike
Pingback: An Unfinished Melody (Piano Cover of “Sleepless Beauty” by Ryuichi Sakuma) | Ramisa the Authoress
Poignant and beautiful, it moved so many emotions within me. And the title is brilliant as well. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for your words. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Woww!!! Good Work!!!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLike
In a child’s eyes all men are accent. I love that line. Very talented writer.
Erik
http://erikconover.com/2014/07/13/smile-its-sunday/
LikeLike
Thank you!
LikeLike
this is what good poetry does to me.
doesn’t make me follow the writerbutjoin
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for reading.
LikeLike
Pingback: Shared from WordPress | wasp0754's Blog
totally awesome poem. i’m voiceless indeed. thx for sharing
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for reading. π
LikeLike
Thoroughly enjoyed. Particularly like the use of the definition. Reads very well!
LikeLike
Thank you!
LikeLike
Reblogged this on Mouthsealedshutforever and commented:
I find this to be very powerful and wonderful.
LikeLike
Thank you! And thank you for the reblog – I’ve been without internet the last few days, but will check your blog out today. We have similar usernames.
LikeLike
You’re welcome. It was really good. & that is true we do. I just realized this.
LikeLike
so powerful, my heart is elated
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m glad my poem touched you.
LikeLike
Reblogged this on ventkin's Blog.
LikeLike
Thank you for the reblog!
LikeLike
Indeed heart warming
LikeLike
Thank you.
LikeLike
Sad and beautiful do not go together…so just thanks for writing
LikeLike
π Thanks for reading.
LikeLike
bnvgh
LikeLike
hi narender
LikeLike
Reblogged this on samdontdelay's Blog and commented:
Do you have a left over to share
LikeLike
Thank you for the reblog!
LikeLike
u welcome
LikeLike
BE POSITIVE GO AHEAD
LikeLike
It leaves me not expecting what I didn’t expect. Thank you.
LikeLike
Thank you for reading.
LikeLike
great fluidity and word choice
LikeLike
Thanks!
LikeLike
Wow such an intense picture painted with this poem. Thank you for posting.
LikeLike
Thank you for reading. π
LikeLike